12/12 Final Reflective Blog

How a computer can help your doctor better diagnose cancer - Institute for Medical Engineering & Science

I felt that the peer editing process was super helpful for me to not only improve my writing from the feedback received, but also to see and learn from other people's writing. In high school, I got very used to the basic five-paragraph structure and having three body paragraphs be the three reasons listed in my thesis. However, I believe seeing the different ways my peers organize their papers in comparison to mine was very interesting and helped me branch out from my old routine and further develop my writing. The blogging process was also very helpful for taking the first steps toward getting my thoughts written out. The prompts really helped me develop my position and set up my rough drafts. 

As a computer science major, I was worried coming into this class because I didn't think my interests would connect very well to health or writing in general, but I actually found each of the prompts and my individual topics very interesting and enjoyed learning more about subjects that are not directly related to my academic field. I am also interested in learning more about how healthcare and computer science can relate to one another in the future. 



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  1. Trent ThainDecember 12, 2022 at 6:24 PM

    I agree that the the topics given from the prompts were much more interesting that I thought they would be.

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